CONeal wrote:
Hello,
I was looking for some translation help for a tattoo. I have always wanted a tattoo in Irish as a way of honoring my great grandfather who moved from Schull, Ireland to America. As you can imagine I never really felt comfortable with an American tattooist putting Irish words on my back. However, I have been afforded the opportunity to travel to Ireland this summer in a study abroad program at my university, and I feel that getting the tattoo in Ireland would make the meaning behind it more powerful as well as ensuring punctuation and grammar. Unfortunately I am still very cautious since this will be permanent and would like as many translation opinions as possible. What I need translated is the following quote.
"I am the master of my fate. I am the captain of my soul."
This is from a poem called Invictus by William Ernest Henley. Any help here would be greatly appreciated, as this is something very sentimental for me. As far as dialect common Irish is fine, or the dialect that would be used in the Schull region. I'm not sure what dialect that would be, but but I do know Schull is on one of the southern most shores of Ireland if that is a help.
Thank you for your time,
Casey O'Neal
p.s.-If anyone is just bored, or is looking for some translation practice it would be cool to see the whole poem in Irish. This is not part of my request, just something I think would be awesome to have typed up somewhere for future reference.
Hi Casey, sorry it took so long to get a reply and sorry to hear about your grandfather also!
Here is a very literal attempt but it has a nice ring to it:
"
Is mise máistir mo chinniúna is captaen m'anama"
I am the master of my fate/ destiny and captain of my soulor
"
Is mise ceannaire mo chinniúna is captaen m'anama"
I am the leadar/ controller of my fate/ destiny and master of my soul
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Is Fearr súil romhainn ná ḋá ṡúil inár ndiaiḋ
(Amhlaoibh Ó Súilleabháin)
Please wait for corrections/ more input from other forum members before acting on advice
I'm familiar with Munster Irish/ Gaolainn na Mumhan (GM) and the Official Standard/an Caighdeán Oifigiúil (CO)